Freddie, I think you really did a great job reading this. It was measured, clear and well done. i admire all you guys for doing this - I really do.
Paca - I totally agree with Robin. I think that it was emotive but in no way melodramatic. And I too loved your description of the avaricious parasites of the world. Gobblers indeed!
Oh, this was very nice writing. A very interesting piece from paca. Beautiful reading too, Freddie, with some perfectly timed pauses. A great combination.
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So fun, Freddie! An excellent read.
Also, you should de-privatize your blog for the day--poor Natalie was so disappointed she couldn't hear you!
Great read, you paced it so well. Love your voice too.
Oh, very nice job of reading. I am so envious of this ability.
I'm so curious about all these stories to see how they end. This one was no exception. Loved the hook.
Hey, awesome! Thanks so much.
Though... my writing sure sounds melodramatic to me now. Surely it's appropriate in context. Surely.
Thanks again!
freddie, your reading was fantastic!
And paca, I don't at all think it was melodramatic - it was strong feeling, strongly expressed, the way I heard it read by our girl.
Loved the image the "gobblers of the world" gave me.
Thanks for the comments, everyone.
Freddie, I think you really did a great job reading this. It was measured, clear and well done. i admire all you guys for doing this - I really do.
Paca - I totally agree with Robin. I think that it was emotive but in no way melodramatic. And I too loved your description of the avaricious parasites of the world. Gobblers indeed!
Oh, this was very nice writing. A very interesting piece from paca. Beautiful reading too, Freddie, with some perfectly timed pauses. A great combination.
What beautifully clear reading of an intriguing story.
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