Thursday, September 4, 2008

Paca's Story

Hope I did this justice. . . .

9 comments:

Kiersten said...

So fun, Freddie! An excellent read.

Also, you should de-privatize your blog for the day--poor Natalie was so disappointed she couldn't hear you!

Natalie said...

Great read, you paced it so well. Love your voice too.

Julie Weathers said...

Oh, very nice job of reading. I am so envious of this ability.

I'm so curious about all these stories to see how they end. This one was no exception. Loved the hook.

pacatrue said...

Hey, awesome! Thanks so much.

Though... my writing sure sounds melodramatic to me now. Surely it's appropriate in context. Surely.

Thanks again!

Robin S. said...

freddie, your reading was fantastic!

And paca, I don't at all think it was melodramatic - it was strong feeling, strongly expressed, the way I heard it read by our girl.

Loved the image the "gobblers of the world" gave me.

freddie said...

Thanks for the comments, everyone.

JaneyV said...

Freddie, I think you really did a great job reading this. It was measured, clear and well done. i admire all you guys for doing this - I really do.

Paca - I totally agree with Robin. I think that it was emotive but in no way melodramatic. And I too loved your description of the avaricious parasites of the world. Gobblers indeed!

McKoala said...

Oh, this was very nice writing. A very interesting piece from paca. Beautiful reading too, Freddie, with some perfectly timed pauses. A great combination.

fairyhedgehog said...

What beautifully clear reading of an intriguing story.