Love it, freddie! I closed my eyes when I listened, so I could take in the scene, and as I listened, I was there. You gave me just enough description that I could see my own version of what Ana saw - my favorite way to 'read'. Good, good stuff!
are you a native Midwesterner, freddie? You made me homesick for Illinois :) Love the piece - I may have to go check out the Legion, after all (have been avoiding it for time reasons).
With the way Sebastian appears, I felt a little like I was watching The Doctor surprised by The Master. Now I want to hear about the swordplay!
Fight! Fight! Fight! And I love your voice.
I enjoyed hearing this read in your own lovely voice.
You read this great! I loved the bit about only noticing the stars' beauty when she was surprised by it.
I also felt as if I were right there in the moment...very nice reading!!!
Roll on Part II.
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